One example that led the reader to the breakdown of my essay was when I wrote the description of the key lime pie I ordered at Wolfgang Puck’s restaurant, “….just the way a key lime pie should be but with a dab of something else” “Shinning...” (Lynch 4) it was pointed out that while I discussed the key lime pie at Wolfgang Puck’s restaurant, I lacked development and clarity of my idea which made it hard for the reader to follow...
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Another example of this clarity issue was when I wrote “The park itself is broken up into 7 distinct areas which include themed rides for the genre of that area”. Again I should have developed this statement with more description in the prewriting process to give clarity and flow to my statement. The reason I bring up these two examples of where my paper lacked clarity was to show how I could have easily resolved the problem if I would have organized my thoughts and ideas using a detailed outline during the prewriting process...
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