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Essay heading: On The Weigh Down
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I only recommend that you check that you are using transitions that fit with the past tense. For example, I notice that you use the transition “now.” Since you are describing events in the past and “now” refers to the present, that transition would not work.
To help you, I will give you this list of transitions and their uses so that you can have a variety of choices...
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I only recommend that you check that you are using transitions that fit with the past tense. For example, I notice that you use the transition “now.” Since you are describing events in the past and “now” refers to the present, that transition would not work.
To help you, I will give you this list of transitions and their uses so that you can have a variety of choices...
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