Critique of "Fatalist Attraction"

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Miscellaneous

 

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Patricia M

 

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September 30, 2016

 

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University

 

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A

 

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I can tell that you have strong feelings about this topic when you talk about the example of your own family members. But I also like that you are willing to keep an open mind as we learn more about biotechnology and especially about human cloning. In the first paragraph, I think you provide a good summary of the article and then you end the paragraph with your thesis sentence...
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It is easy for the reader to understand the main point that you want to make in this sentence. But I think that the first paragraph is a little long and complicated and maybe the reader could follow the summary more easily if you divided that first paragraph into two or three smaller paragraphs. That way your introduction and summary would be several paragraphs instead of just one paragraph but I think that is okay for this kind of essay...
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